12-01-2012, 05:24 PM
gotta say this is one of me favouritists poems on here so far by one of the many am begining to respect a lot
2 things tho 1 "Must I explain your stories?" am not exactly sure why but i didnt like that line..forgive me bad explanation but it kinda took me away from the poem for a moment
2 had to google the word 'fiat' i mite have found the wrong definition but is a chatholic word used to express "everything as god wills it"..i just thought it a strange word to use when the next line is of hollow skies
imo the last stanza is just beautifully written
(btw somone told me that dragons is more believable than virgins from kansas..tho am not sure wot he meant)
LOVED this write
2 things tho 1 "Must I explain your stories?" am not exactly sure why but i didnt like that line..forgive me bad explanation but it kinda took me away from the poem for a moment
2 had to google the word 'fiat' i mite have found the wrong definition but is a chatholic word used to express "everything as god wills it"..i just thought it a strange word to use when the next line is of hollow skies
imo the last stanza is just beautifully written
(btw somone told me that dragons is more believable than virgins from kansas..tho am not sure wot he meant
)LOVED this write