Daddy's Little Girl

[nothing_good16]

I really liked the poem. I just think that there should be more description of the girl to give the reader a better view of why it's hard for her to be loved. I like how the phrases "worn-out thing" and "freak of nature" kind of described it, and they were good terms but, maybe more in depth imagery would help.....i don't know. Just my opinion. Good job though.