12-01-2012, 05:31 AM
(07-31-2011, 10:55 AM)Leanne Wrote:I have been away from this thread. When there is a dispute between Billy and Todd, Todd wins the tiebreak.You don't like the enjambment, Todd does, do we have a tiebreaker?
Thanks very much, Billy -- your reading was not how I saw it, but I like it a lot through that filter and it's most certainly not wrong, it works perfectly.
I especially hadn't thought of a butterfly in the last, I was thinking more of angel wings or something along those lines, but butterflies are new beginnings and I really enjoy that idea. Different interpretations make me happy
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

You don't like the enjambment, Todd does, do we have a tiebreaker?