11-27-2012, 11:21 AM
I'll get back to the poetry in a moment.
I think the main problem with our responses is that I'm talking to mulitiple people at once, and some of my responses to something Leanne said are being mistaken for responses to something Billy said. Even if I give a quote from somebody, I'm still talking to more than one person in the replies.
Another problem is that for some reason I don't like Leanne thinking of me as a hedonist. I don't know exactly why. Even if I was a hedonist, it's ok with Billy. And that's a good thing. If I was, I'd be fine with it, no matter what Leanne says. Though I don't think I am.
I think I like Billy and Leanne a great deal. And I want them to understand what I'm saying to them. Even if they don't like what I'm saying. If I got pleasure out of pain or talking about pain, I'd be a hedonist in that sense. But I don't. At least not the pain I was talking about.
But I have to admit, I wouldn't write poetry very much at all if it wasn't for this kind of pain. I'd be in the place I want to be, still with the person I want to be with, doing things I did during the happiest time of my life. That's what gives me pleasure. And when I did write poetry, it would be very different than the poetry I currently write.
I think the main problem with our responses is that I'm talking to mulitiple people at once, and some of my responses to something Leanne said are being mistaken for responses to something Billy said. Even if I give a quote from somebody, I'm still talking to more than one person in the replies.
Another problem is that for some reason I don't like Leanne thinking of me as a hedonist. I don't know exactly why. Even if I was a hedonist, it's ok with Billy. And that's a good thing. If I was, I'd be fine with it, no matter what Leanne says. Though I don't think I am.
I think I like Billy and Leanne a great deal. And I want them to understand what I'm saying to them. Even if they don't like what I'm saying. If I got pleasure out of pain or talking about pain, I'd be a hedonist in that sense. But I don't. At least not the pain I was talking about.
But I have to admit, I wouldn't write poetry very much at all if it wasn't for this kind of pain. I'd be in the place I want to be, still with the person I want to be with, doing things I did during the happiest time of my life. That's what gives me pleasure. And when I did write poetry, it would be very different than the poetry I currently write.