11-26-2012, 05:00 PM
it's a nice poem but it's a bit off being a good poem.
the main problem is it has little feel of love or sex. it reads more like a wish list. try and draw a picture with the words. how do you want him/her to hold your waist and touch your face.?
thanks for the read.
the main problem is it has little feel of love or sex. it reads more like a wish list. try and draw a picture with the words. how do you want him/her to hold your waist and touch your face.?
thanks for the read.