F for Life
#4
Thanks for the feedback people. I've changed a few of the lines and read it back to myself out loud and it reads a bit better now. It still needs a bit of work but I'll fix it soon.

Thanks for the help,

Spoons
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F for Life - by CoffeeSpoons - 11-22-2012, 10:07 AM
RE: F for Life - by TwistedAngel - 11-22-2012, 05:07 PM
RE: F for Life - by cidermaid - 11-23-2012, 04:31 PM
RE: F for Life - by CoffeeSpoons - 11-25-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: F for Life - by Arriedo - 11-29-2012, 03:24 AM



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