Pup is doing very well, thank goodness, or it would be totally embarrassing 
No, metaphor alone does not a poem make. Metaphor is a poetic technique, of course, but you can't build a poem around one single phrase. There is something to the intent idea, but just wanting something to be recognised as a poem is not enough. At least a few other people really do have to agree with you

No, metaphor alone does not a poem make. Metaphor is a poetic technique, of course, but you can't build a poem around one single phrase. There is something to the intent idea, but just wanting something to be recognised as a poem is not enough. At least a few other people really do have to agree with you
It could be worse
