11-24-2012, 08:07 AM
I consider it poetry when presented like that -- the fact that you have broken it into strophes/ stanzas rather than paragraphs is not the deciding factor though, it's that you have considered where to put the line breaks rather than making them arbitrary. You use poetic devices -- metaphor, personification -- so, if your intent is for it to be a poem, then it is.
It could be worse
