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The Sweet Eater

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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12-22-2009, 10:18 PM

Yeah, the title's pretty terrible Tongue

Thanks for the comments. My phrasing and rhythm does need work

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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The Sweet Eater - by addy - 12-21-2009, 03:14 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by billy - 12-21-2009, 05:33 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 12-22-2009, 10:18 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 01-25-2010, 03:21 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by billy - 01-25-2010, 03:32 PM

RE: The Sweet Eater - by addy - 01-25-2010, 03:51 PM

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