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The Farmer's Awakening
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11-21-2012, 05:55 PM
In the third stanza I meant to imply that if she saw him touch the drapes she'd grab the rod, but it isn't clear enough. I'll change it in a mo. Thank you very much for your kind and helpful feedback
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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The Farmer's Awakening - by heslopian - 11-20-2012, 01:17 PM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by billy - 11-20-2012, 07:08 PM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by heslopian - 11-20-2012, 07:18 PM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by Keith - 11-21-2012, 09:55 AM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by heslopian - 11-21-2012, 05:55 PM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by billy - 11-21-2012, 06:08 PM
RE: The Farmer's Awakening - by heslopian - 11-21-2012, 06:15 PM
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