11-19-2012, 10:04 PM
i like V.2 a lot but prefered the word 'tablecloth' used in V.1 it gives a clear image of where you are..it could be any table otherwise, an from the first read i kinda had to scramble for another image in me head as "Spoons scratch soup bowls,"
cant say i like the title much S.O.S is a call for help..an Texting a bit to obvious..maybe shes textin a mate asking her to get away from a borin family meal
enjoyed this a lot an i can see many a kid doing this round millions of xmas dinner tables very soon
cant say i like the title much S.O.S is a call for help..an Texting a bit to obvious..maybe shes textin a mate asking her to get away from a borin family meal
enjoyed this a lot an i can see many a kid doing this round millions of xmas dinner tables very soon