11-17-2012, 05:31 PM
Spot on, you have managed to capture this subject really well and there is so much for anyone, who has ever lived like this or had a 20 something kipper, to identify with.
The flow of your poem was so smooth and enhanced the projection and image of a life lived through a computor screen with no connection to real life. Well penned with plenty of rich images. Thanks for shareing.
The flow of your poem was so smooth and enhanced the projection and image of a life lived through a computor screen with no connection to real life. Well penned with plenty of rich images. Thanks for shareing.