Mindflow

[Art Deco]

Hi Mayflow - A short and vivid poem that I don't altogether understand!
Just a few comments ... Your use of capital letters is inconsistant - Why F on Flowing but not B on beating or vica versa!!

My Heart is beating
My blood is Flowing...
Between the beats,
There is a Knowing
My mind
is like a River...
Flowing deep, and
at the same time this line rather spoils the flow - perhaps "Flowing
It is like the Ocean deep and like the
that the River Seeks Ocean that the River seeks" might
work better.