In the blink of an eye

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In the blink of an eye

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11-14-2012, 05:47 PM

Such a sweet piece. I also liked the passage of time (god that third stanza Big Grin

. Kids could be so rotten).

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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In the blink of an eye - by Keith - 11-14-2012, 09:12 AM

RE: In the blink of an eye - by addy - 11-14-2012, 05:47 PM

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