Your true home

[billy]

Love turns the water into wine
and causes the bitter to taste sweet feels cliche and a little weak.

Love turns copper into Gold
Love brings the dead back to life i can relate a lot to this line.

Love transforms slavery into freedom
in every single mind

Love is the consummation of understanding
Love is the Harlot on the street who thought she was alone solid image, would work better as the opening couplet?

Love is the ultimate creation
Love is your true home

not a half bad love is poem mayflower, (is that from terry pratchett i wonder? ) it feels a little religious though it's probably not meant to. i thought the first couplet could be a more original

thanks for the read.