A Senryu on zen
#5
Big thumbs up from me. I have a similar facination with the immage of a cliff shedding it's skin.
Try your mind on this... a sea cliff...that decends like an aged lover onto the beach, to crush and smother her with the weight of his occupation.
Also liked your 2nd offshoot above. although... I thinking perhaps a small change, but as a newbie to offering my thoughts, i do so with some trepidation. :\

Canyon shadow
wondering
if he misses me too
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A Senryu on zen - by billy - 07-18-2012, 04:43 PM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by Todd - 07-19-2012, 12:41 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by Aish - 07-19-2012, 02:10 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by billy - 08-21-2012, 11:57 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by cidermaid - 11-13-2012, 05:40 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by billy - 11-16-2012, 01:04 PM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by ChristopherSea - 02-13-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by heslopian - 03-13-2014, 09:46 AM
RE: A Senryu on zen - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2014, 01:59 PM



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