11-13-2012, 05:12 AM
This gave me a warm and fuzzy autumn feel good moment.
For me the best line is the 2nd. It seams to capture the essence of fallen leaves - soft slipper like quality and (crunchy) sprinkled (hard) golden...love all of that. The description of the kiss was just the icing on the cake.
Thank you for the share. great stuff.
For me the best line is the 2nd. It seams to capture the essence of fallen leaves - soft slipper like quality and (crunchy) sprinkled (hard) golden...love all of that. The description of the kiss was just the icing on the cake.
Thank you for the share. great stuff.