11-11-2012, 08:07 PM
Hi--what a great poem! Yes, it's sad, but such a great thought at the same time! I was more happy reading it, just because the idea to write a poem on such a subject, and the way it was done, seemed so brilliant.
I could edit one thing, unless this was deliberate--mosquitos' whine, with an apostrophe.
I could edit one thing, unless this was deliberate--mosquitos' whine, with an apostrophe.

