10-30-2012, 06:36 PM
it feels tighter now.
i think the last line is exceptional within the context of the poem.
i think the last line is exceptional within the context of the poem.
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My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 06:10 AM
RE: My request - by TwistedAngel - 10-17-2012, 07:52 AM
RE: My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 08:01 AM
RE: My request - by billy - 10-17-2012, 09:07 AM
RE: My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 09:11 AM
RE: My request - by heslopian - 10-21-2012, 12:41 PM
RE: My request - by billy - 10-21-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: My request - by Keith - 10-22-2012, 07:17 AM
RE: My request - by billy - 10-30-2012, 06:36 PM
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