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just mercedes
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10-27-2012, 08:45 AM

The way I learned haiku, the gaijin is not present in the poem except as observer - he would not instruct anything to act, he would record what is happening and compare it subtly to something else.

flying fireflies
tangle up in aircraft lights ~
widely-spreading wings

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FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-25-2012, 04:38 AM

RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-25-2012, 08:00 AM

RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 07:06 AM

RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 09:44 AM

RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 11:27 AM

RE: FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-26-2012, 06:34 PM

RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-27-2012, 06:07 AM

RE: FireFly - by just mercedes - 10-27-2012, 08:45 AM

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