FireFly
#7
seriously guys, it's not about violations or anything else. opinions are allowed to be wrong, people are allowed to make mistakes.

as to the repetition when you have a 11 repetitions in a a 14 word poem it leaves you with 3 non repetitive words.
in such a small poem, don't we need to get as much as we can into it?
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FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-25-2012, 04:38 AM
RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-25-2012, 08:00 AM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 07:06 AM
RE: FireFly - by Keith - 10-26-2012, 09:44 AM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-26-2012, 11:27 AM
RE: FireFly - by ddtankerz - 10-26-2012, 06:34 PM
RE: FireFly - by billy - 10-27-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: FireFly - by just mercedes - 10-27-2012, 08:45 AM



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