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My request
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10-21-2012, 12:41 PM
I read the second draft, and the syntax felt very odd, but I'm hesitant to criticise it because I think it may be a deliberate part of the poem, and the last two lines are very effective in their odd expression. An interesting piece, thanks for the read.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 06:10 AM
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RE: My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 08:01 AM
RE: My request - by billy - 10-17-2012, 09:07 AM
RE: My request - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 09:11 AM
RE: My request - by heslopian - 10-21-2012, 12:41 PM
RE: My request - by billy - 10-21-2012, 01:40 PM
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