First Poem
#7
i see this as a human being waking up from the bullshit of the rat race an that need to 'fit in'

an i LOVE it..tho is sad that it took so long init

an as much billy nauses me with his cliche ..i begrudingly admit he wos right an you rewrite of the first line is really cool Smile

all it needs now is a wikid title Smile
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Messages In This Thread
First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-18-2012, 09:26 AM
RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-18-2012, 09:41 AM
RE: First Poem - by addy - 10-18-2012, 09:53 AM
RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-19-2012, 06:14 AM
RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-19-2012, 07:01 AM
RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-19-2012, 07:21 AM
RE: First Poem - by TwistedAngel - 10-19-2012, 07:31 AM
RE: First Poem - by vrgd - 10-28-2012, 01:06 AM
RE: First Poem - by CoffeeSpoons - 10-30-2012, 03:11 AM
RE: First Poem - by just mercedes - 10-30-2012, 07:13 AM
RE: First Poem - by billy - 10-30-2012, 08:36 AM



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