10-17-2012, 04:43 PM
LOVE the title of this 
is almost 2 poems in 1 IMO stanzas 1 to 11 then 12 to 15
you soooo cynical..an i like that,but the write has a undertone of bitterness as well ? taking just stanzas 1 to 11 am happy reading along an nodding me head but also thinking...hmm thats ok but as long as they aint bothering you then wots the harm ?
12 to 15 is me fave it goes a bit deeper an really enjoyed it that said the overall piece is a bit self righteous...err sez me Mz Shouty Crackers at the world
as one of you first poems i think its awesome
is almost 2 poems in 1 IMO stanzas 1 to 11 then 12 to 15you soooo cynical..an i like that,but the write has a undertone of bitterness as well ? taking just stanzas 1 to 11 am happy reading along an nodding me head but also thinking...hmm thats ok but as long as they aint bothering you then wots the harm ?
12 to 15 is me fave it goes a bit deeper an really enjoyed it that said the overall piece is a bit self righteous...err sez me Mz Shouty Crackers at the world
as one of you first poems i think its awesome