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The view from my high horse
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10-17-2012, 05:23 AM
I really enjoyed the rhymes Rich, kept me reading, wanting the lines to be clever, and they dont dissapoint, I agree with addy on two pieces and they would both stand out for me. I particularly enjoyed the rhythm created by repeated rhyming in the last Stanza. You did a great job on this well done. Thanks for the read.
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The view from my high horse - by richthehat - 09-18-2012, 02:09 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by billy - 09-18-2012, 07:12 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by addy - 09-18-2012, 10:59 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by billy - 09-18-2012, 11:50 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by richthehat - 09-20-2012, 03:06 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by Keith - 10-17-2012, 05:23 AM
RE: The view from my high horse - by TwistedAngel - 10-17-2012, 04:43 PM
RE: The view from my high horse - by cidermaid - 11-14-2012, 04:43 PM
RE: The view from my high horse - by Rose Love - 11-14-2012, 05:11 PM
RE: The view from my high horse - by billy - 11-14-2012, 06:10 PM
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