10-16-2012, 02:50 PM
really really like this 
an personally find meself nodding an agreeing with a lot of it
my only critisism would be (actually is just me own OCD not really a critisism) is mostly stanzas 1 an 4 where you mix short worded lines with long worded lines..makes it look messy
but it doesnt spoil the read thru
cool poem
an personally find meself nodding an agreeing with a lot of itmy only critisism would be (actually is just me own OCD not really a critisism) is mostly stanzas 1 an 4 where you mix short worded lines with long worded lines..makes it look messy
but it doesnt spoil the read thru
cool poem