Over-salted
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billy
-thanks for the time and read. hope the edit finds you just as well

popeye
-glad you enjoyed the words! thanks for reading

lottie
-hello! welcome to the site, it's nice to have you and your feedback. have taken your thoughts into consideration, especially with regard to the articles. still debating about the 'lace'. appreciate your time.

mercedes
-appreciate your thoughts. debating about the first line. I'm glad you could connect with this

todd
-i appreciated your comments about the title especially; everything else is helpful as well, of course. removed the "hanging," tried adjusting the "taste" part. thanks for your time
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Over-salted - by Philatone - 10-13-2012, 07:45 AM
RE: Over-salted - by billy - 10-13-2012, 08:13 AM
RE: Over-salted - by popeye - 10-13-2012, 09:05 AM
RE: Over-salted - by Lottie90 - 10-13-2012, 06:28 PM
RE: Over-salted - by just mercedes - 10-14-2012, 08:56 AM
RE: Over-salted - by Todd - 10-14-2012, 10:40 AM
RE: Over-salted - by Philatone - 10-15-2012, 02:48 AM
RE: Over-salted - by rowens - 10-15-2012, 03:25 AM
RE: Over-salted - by billy - 10-17-2012, 09:28 AM
RE: Over-salted - by Todd - 10-17-2012, 09:42 AM
RE: Over-salted - by just mercedes - 10-17-2012, 03:43 PM



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