Over-salted

Over-salted

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Are you alluding to me?

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10-13-2012, 08:13 AM (This post was last modified: 10-13-2012, 08:13 AM by billy.)

no nits here geoff.
the last line makes it extremely sad and poignant.
i like that it leaves the reader open to put their own slant on why the person has gone.
either way it depicts a death of one kind or another.
thanks for the read.

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Over-salted - by Philatone - 10-13-2012, 07:45 AM

RE: Over-salted - by billy - 10-13-2012, 08:13 AM

RE: Over-salted - by popeye - 10-13-2012, 09:05 AM

RE: Over-salted - by Lottie90 - 10-13-2012, 06:28 PM

RE: Over-salted - by just mercedes - 10-14-2012, 08:56 AM

RE: Over-salted - by Todd - 10-14-2012, 10:40 AM

RE: Over-salted - by Philatone - 10-15-2012, 02:48 AM

RE: Over-salted - by rowens - 10-15-2012, 03:25 AM

RE: Over-salted - by billy - 10-17-2012, 09:28 AM

RE: Over-salted - by Todd - 10-17-2012, 09:42 AM

RE: Over-salted - by just mercedes - 10-17-2012, 03:43 PM

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