10-12-2012, 06:16 AM
The beginning is sewn well to the end -- that is satisfying. I wanted to read it as a description of another person, dead, perhaps in a war-zone, but plainly that is not intended: it is, literally, a reflective piece.
I do not think the capitals are needed, and in fact, I think they detract from the force sought.
Did you mean 'resonate'? Or is 'resin' important as at first I thought?
Keep up the good work ---Mr Brown!
I do not think the capitals are needed, and in fact, I think they detract from the force sought.
Did you mean 'resonate'? Or is 'resin' important as at first I thought?
Keep up the good work ---Mr Brown!