Someone's Poem

[billy]

perhaps in kneading turgid dough; is just one of many really good images. i can feel fingers, palms at work (almost)

I look her in the window, but only stars,
only a bit of carbon in my hand,

the last stanza gives a perfect finish and more than a hint as to the creativity. i also liked how you worked the petal and Venusian clichés in without making them cliche
thanks for the read.