10-09-2012, 05:25 AM
Whew... I feel rather hot and bothered, especially after reading that first stanza 
So many things to like here Rob. The Coleridge references make me incredibly happy, but I think my favourite lines are:
"I only know her hunger is relevant
to the story the night keeps from me"
The possibilities in those two lines are endless. Great to see you!
So many things to like here Rob. The Coleridge references make me incredibly happy, but I think my favourite lines are:
"I only know her hunger is relevant
to the story the night keeps from me"
The possibilities in those two lines are endless. Great to see you!
It could be worse