Not so sweet
#6
Agree with the other comments the clever sinister qualities. Like a cake in the oven it was rising well; I especially enjoyed the freezer part. Personally I think the ending made it deflate a bit. I was hoping for a final jab of macabre irony, but I thought "in the comfort of home" was a little soft, and didn't really add too much dimension. (Something about lighting them on fire at a party would've been entertaining, though I admit, way too obvious Smile )
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Not so sweet - by Philatone - 09-25-2012, 11:25 AM
RE: Not so sweet - by billy - 09-25-2012, 12:36 PM
RE: Not so sweet - by Aish - 09-27-2012, 03:04 AM
RE: Not so sweet - by Aish - 10-05-2012, 12:57 AM
RE: Not so sweet - by Keith - 10-05-2012, 04:40 AM
RE: Not so sweet - by addy - 10-05-2012, 11:07 AM
RE: Not so sweet - by Philatone - 10-08-2012, 12:28 AM



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