10-05-2012, 11:07 AM
Agree with the other comments the clever sinister qualities. Like a cake in the oven it was rising well; I especially enjoyed the freezer part. Personally I think the ending made it deflate a bit. I was hoping for a final jab of macabre irony, but I thought "in the comfort of home" was a little soft, and didn't really add too much dimension. (Something about lighting them on fire at a party would've been entertaining, though I admit, way too obvious
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PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
