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10-05-2012, 10:47 AM (This post was last modified: 10-05-2012, 11:06 AM by billy.)

does warm salt sing? i sort of stopped a while to ponder the fact Smile

a solid homage to a hottie. you create an affinity with her that's pretty loose
yet strong albeit on your end Big Grin

. i have no constructive crit apart from the salt simile

i enjoyed it a lot.

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Zooey - by rowens - 10-05-2012, 01:45 AM

RE: Zooey - by billy - 10-05-2012, 10:47 AM

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