Freak Show

[billy]

hi jolly

great to see you posting your poetry.

Welcome to the freak show of Borderline Personality Disorder
Once, you hear my story
you'll tear your guts out
then have the urge to swallow them
because that's that I do to myself [b]thats what i do
mentally and feel physically
without even inflicting any wounds upon myself. even isn't needed
I leave my thoughts to do that for me.

just an overall suggestion. tell us or should i say, show us your story instead of telling us what we'll feel like when we here it.
thanks for the read,

don't forget to leave feedback on other's poetry please