An old friend
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The only line that feels a little forced in wording is the one about bending the truth to suit the person, but the meaning is clear. It's a no nonsense direct plea to a person. It doesn't need artsy lines, and you didn't use any, except sort of in the second line. I guess it's your choice how you spell 'alright', and there's a 'your/you're' typo on the line that starts 'I can see inside you'.
It seems pretty cut and dry, if it's really a true story. Serious, and direct.
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An old friend - by richthehat - 09-27-2012, 04:35 AM
RE: An old friend - by rowens - 09-27-2012, 04:49 AM
RE: An old friend - by billy - 09-27-2012, 07:18 AM



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