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F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)

F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)
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09-26-2012, 08:12 AM
(09-26-2012, 07:33 AM)billy Wrote:  a suggestion to boil the pot even more,

why not put the break after door. that way it breaks away as it does in the movies to the morning where the next scene shows them having breakfast? (if you use a two stanza format)
A perfectly valid idea like a jump cut in fiction...boil away

Thanks Billy
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:08 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Leanne - 09-25-2012, 05:12 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:20 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-25-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 07:11 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-26-2012, 02:02 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 02:41 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-26-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 08:12 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-27-2012, 02:46 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-27-2012, 07:50 PM



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