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F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)

F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)
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09-25-2012, 05:20 AM
Thanks Leanne. I'll make those changes and mull over strophes some more. In general for me the first draft usually suggests if I'm going to have strophe breaks though it can change.
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RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 04:59 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:08 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Leanne - 09-25-2012, 05:12 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:20 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-25-2012, 06:54 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 07:11 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-26-2012, 02:02 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 02:41 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-26-2012, 07:33 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 08:12 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-27-2012, 02:46 AM
RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-27-2012, 07:50 PM



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