09-23-2012, 01:34 PM
no im never happy with my poems I know they can improve and get better!
I admit I think more of the words being creative avoiding cliches as best I could... then actual punctuation and grammar can these break poem just as much as bad cliches and words?
I do need to seriously brush on punctuation the commas and periods you put on there made it flow even better how is punctuation different in poetry then it is say essay or fiction writing?
I admit I think more of the words being creative avoiding cliches as best I could... then actual punctuation and grammar can these break poem just as much as bad cliches and words?
I do need to seriously brush on punctuation the commas and periods you put on there made it flow even better how is punctuation different in poetry then it is say essay or fiction writing?

