09-23-2012, 01:53 AM
its true about getting constrictive criticism just a couple of suggestions on this site and I got much better my poem flowed better and felt for the first time like a poem
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Lovers Paradise - by poetsorrow - 09-22-2012, 03:36 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by billy - 09-22-2012, 09:10 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by Wildcard - 09-22-2012, 10:01 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by poetsorrow - 09-22-2012, 10:16 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by rowens - 09-22-2012, 12:33 PM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by billy - 09-22-2012, 05:25 PM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by poetsorrow - 09-23-2012, 01:53 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by rowens - 09-23-2012, 04:25 AM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by poetsorrow - 09-23-2012, 01:34 PM
RE: Lovers Paridise - by Leanne - 09-23-2012, 03:38 PM
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