09-22-2012, 10:16 AM
Thank you for the feedback! its a work in progress defiantly what exactly is a cliche? and how do I avoid these? must avoid them entirely?
some might be used sure but this is poetry were talking about ideas have been used for thousands of years how can you be original?
I love learning and want become a great poet let me in on what it takes to make a poem original with heart at the same time following the laws
of grammar poetry?
alright I tweaked it some sometimes in stead of improving cliches I noticed its better to just remove them outright
some might be used sure but this is poetry were talking about ideas have been used for thousands of years how can you be original?
I love learning and want become a great poet let me in on what it takes to make a poem original with heart at the same time following the laws
of grammar poetry?
alright I tweaked it some sometimes in stead of improving cliches I noticed its better to just remove them outright