Beauty (strong language)

[Wildcard]

You gave me a good laugh. If I had a criticism it would be that overall it only made me laugh. The repetitive nature of the piece is a great setup for the 'punchline', but doesn't lend itself toward providing new images or facets to the piece. Or maybe I am just out of the loop and this is the key to finding the Templar's treasure . . .

I am just telling you what I overthought about your poem

Thanks for sharing