09-22-2012, 08:35 AM
i laughed at the last stanza. mainly because it brought the poem and me down to earth. and it was funny.
i think the title could have been put to better use, beauty squared or something that adds to the poem.
beauty is in the eye of the beholder and sometimes it's in the eye of beauty.
it lacks something but i'm not sure what it is, maybe quotation marks or italics, something that would help lift it a little higher.
thanks for the read
i think the title could have been put to better use, beauty squared or something that adds to the poem.
beauty is in the eye of the beholder and sometimes it's in the eye of beauty.
it lacks something but i'm not sure what it is, maybe quotation marks or italics, something that would help lift it a little higher.
thanks for the read