09-11-2012, 03:04 AM
I remember that I took that comma out and then put it back before I posted it. It doesn't make sense to be there, but I was trying give a vague distance between 'my throat' and 'I've' as subjects. On the version I copied out I removed it again. I knew somebody here was going to get me about that comma.
I was thinking 'fit' could play on its several meanings. Can you see it that way?
I was thinking 'fit' could play on its several meanings. Can you see it that way?
