08-28-2012, 03:20 PM
Nah, the syllable count isn't that strict, I just thought "the" made sense from the perspective of a bear. You're correct though, its much better without it 
. Thanks for the feedback
. Thanks for the feedback
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?