Do You Ever Think Of Me?
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i'm usually at fault with a cliche, i never see them till they're pointed out and then it's "how did i miss that"

i think the extra line would act as a hook to take back to the top for another read so it's a doer for me.
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Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by LaurieB - 08-16-2012, 12:05 PM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by Leanne - 08-16-2012, 02:59 PM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by billy - 08-16-2012, 03:57 PM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by LaurieB - 08-16-2012, 11:51 PM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by billy - 08-17-2012, 09:58 AM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by Philatone - 08-17-2012, 12:47 PM
RE: Do You Ever Think Of Me? - by Todd - 08-17-2012, 01:25 PM



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