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Alone in the dark
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08-15-2012, 10:18 AM
(08-15-2012, 07:19 AM)tectak Wrote: We are open season for terse verse and I am terrified.I think your definition of "terse" differs quite a bit from mine... just sayin'... Dale, on re-reading post-coffee, I think you can do away with the first stanza entirely.
It could be worse
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Alone in the dark - by Erthona - 08-15-2012, 01:06 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by Leanne - 08-15-2012, 05:19 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by tectak - 08-15-2012, 07:19 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by Leanne - 08-15-2012, 10:18 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by tectak - 08-15-2012, 03:53 PM
RE: Alone in the dark - by billy - 08-15-2012, 10:22 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by penguin - 08-15-2012, 07:23 PM
RE: Alone in the dark - by Erthona - 08-15-2012, 08:23 PM
RE: Alone in the dark - by billy - 08-16-2012, 11:14 AM
RE: Alone in the dark - by braggman - 08-16-2012, 12:16 PM
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