How They Ply;

[billy]

The river Clyde, an open vein;
and barges heavy, bring the coal
to be unloaded by the crane.
The river Clyde, an open vein,
it runs through Glasgow with the grain
to fill a dinner plate or bowl,
the river Clyde, an open vein
and barges heavy bring the coal.

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An attempt at a triolet. Learn about the triolet here feedback welcomed

i wanted to put 'like a train' on L5 but felt it was too cliche and a bit silly. still pondering it though