My poem
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Is this sarcastic, or... Big Grin

It's good for a short piece. i don't think you need "at home", as the added context doesn't really do much to enhance what's already laid out there.

Thanks for the read Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
My poem - by billy - 08-13-2012, 11:53 AM
RE: My poem - by addy - 08-13-2012, 12:23 PM
RE: My poem - by billy - 08-13-2012, 04:15 PM
RE: My poem - by Philatone - 08-17-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: My poem - by billy - 08-21-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: My poem - by raymond trevitt - 08-18-2012, 12:35 PM



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