At dawn of understanding

[Philatone]

hey mattias! welcome to the site! nice to have you posting

some thoughts

At dawn of understanding

Writing at dawn of understanding.....perhaps this should be the title?
Though early in mourning ...i get the wordplay, but i'm thinking "morning" feels more natural while still allowing the reader to get at the different meanings
misty and brief,...the play continues here, nice
Yet desire in drawing out adorning relief.
Of spoken thoughts eagering a new stand ..."eagering" is not too pleasant. i'm getting lost a bit in this line and one before; it could be punctuation, capital letters,and grammar
At raising wavy lengths hand in hand.
So the words of the night must star so vast,..."star", a noun, should really be a verb
The quarter moon inflaming to rounding grief
That even understanding in time will disappear....could drop the "that"; i like the idea of this line

i enjoyed the ending and the beginning the most; the middle left me stranded somewhat.