Emergency Parking

[tectak]

Changing the tire, you muttered
something about four bolts
instead of sixstop

lodging the wheel to the car
in this moment of frozen repair. though this is not a sentence on planet earth, it may be elsewhere so I am reserving judgement because I like the word use. Having said that I don't see any advantage in twisting "lodging" to substitute for "presenting" or "offering up".....good old Hayes Manual.

Four bolts worth of elevated
highways and salted asphalt
folded into an odometer;You have used this expression before somewhere. Does that count as repetition or early onset dementia?

just enough to tempt a drive
the way a child drops his gloves,

despite his father's
warnings about the cold,
to make the perfect snowball.

I kind of liked this but it is so Phil that I could scream. I only don't scream because I Just
know that;

it would make
no difference.

Best,
tectak